Our make-believe world that we've shared for so long
Will never be more than what it is right now.
You love me I know, and you know I love you.
But you'll stay there forever because of your vow.
I tell myself we're special and different than the rest
That what we have is rare and oh so sweet
Words of passion and poetry for you I write
But it means nothing because it's built on lies and deceit
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Bite it does! I don't like crystal clear, but I guess I can't avoid it forever.
You know, queenie, I think you're ready for REAL love...the honest-to-goodness good kind. Where you feel a part of the world, comfortable around people, comfortable with yourself and, if it's to be, with someone who really can offer himself to you and appreciate you for who you are so you it's right for you. Your poetry is now beginning to show that you see that what happened wasn't really all what it appeared to be, that what you are going through hurts as much from the realization of that than from the disappointment and loss, and that you know there probably wasn't going to be a future in it right from the beginning. That stinks big time, but thank goodness a heck of a lot more wasn't invested in it. I think it's hurt you and cost you enough already as it is...it really is time to heal and get onto other things. Keep writing, keep letting it out, keep working through it. I'll be supporting you all the way.
Thank you Donna.