Mortared Mask

June 20, 2008 / by queenie

If the inside could only feel what the outside sees

Days like today wouldn't matter to me

The smiles, the laughs - I seem so strong

I'm pulled together, I'm chugging along.

 

The outside is nothing but a mortared mask

Not many see that its starting to crack

The darkness from inside is peaking through

How do I stop it?  What do I do?

 

If it all shatters, who will be there

To pick up the pieces, who will care

When the mask is gone and I'm all that's left

Will they ever know I did my best?

 

 

9 comments on Mortared Mask

  • Diane said 2 months ago

    you have some really awesome poetry! Do you have a book out? if not you should think about it! you are excellent!!

  • faithmairee said 2 months ago
    this is excellent!
  • gwensgifts said 2 months ago

    (((hugs)))

  • queenie said 2 months ago

    Gwen---so glad you're back! 

  • queenie said 2 months ago

    Thanks Diane.  No book yet...

  • queenie said 2 months ago

    Thanks Faith.

  • patient22 said 2 months ago

    oh that's really good. many kudos to you. i like the concept

  • maggiemae said 2 months ago

    Great poem!

  • Anonymous said 1 months ago

    You are doing your best, don't forget that!

    Great poem, queenie.  I hope you are saving this one and all that you have written.

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